Revisions Coaching, From Albert Einstein. Writing Time, Part 87

“Make things as simple as possible, but not simpler.” – attributed to Albert Einstein. When revising, it can be worth spending a half hour with the word “As” at the start of sentences. I search through my own work, tossing “As”es into hedges, for it is the slug in gardens of good storytelling, when it involves simultaneous actions. For example, […]

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