I’m moderating a panel on creating tension and another on creating suspense, and it seems like a happy moment to address ways to accomplish this. As well, from the point of view of time management for writers, if we can create suspense and sustain tension as we plot and draft, then we save a crazy amount of hours on revisions.
I.It’s worth taking the time to develop a protagonist the reader will care deeply about. We’ve heard of the Monkeysphere—the theory that humans can only keep a certain number of people close to their hearts. Along with family members and friends, we appear to have room for fictional characters as well. Right, Netflix?
To develop engaging characters, it’s worth taking the time to list flaws and balancing strengths.I see so many flawed protagonists in our subs box, but few of them achieve the balance that helps the reader take them to their hearts. Balance involves developing
- -inner and outer longings.
- -kindnesses and sacrifices.
- -falls and redemptions.
Looking at the extraordinarily flawed and engaging Lisbeth Salander, The Girl With the Dragon Tattoo, she’s not all flaws; in fact, her ferocious loyalty, physical strength, and world-beating intellect balance all the imperfections that make us love her. Looking at my submissions inbox, it seems that there’s a lot of great work on developing flaws in characters, but not much attention to the strengths, as if somehow strengths were old-fashioned.
Once we create that engaging character, half our work in creating tension is done for us as the readers bring their own anxiety for the protagonist to the page. The stakes, depending on our genre, may be survival, love and belonging, power, or freedom. These same stakes resonate with us all, through a character readers can believe in and take for our own.
I hope you’ll have another brilliant writing week. Cheers Mel
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